改錯(cuò)練習(xí)18篇                          Sep 1, 2013

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(1)

   When I talked with the man, I found that from his childhood he develops the habit of carrying the book in his pocket all the time. He was used to read every minute when he had anything else to do. He found a book especial useful during the periods of waiting: waiting doctors, meals ,buses and so on.. That is how he found himself fifteen minute a day for reading. That was how she read twenty books a year---one thousand of books all his lifetime.

(2)

What a long winter vacation! I stay at home doing nothing except homework every day like robot. One day, a idea occurred to me: “Why not to find a part-time job to learn something new?” The next morning, after visit many shops, I was lucky enough to find one in a small but pretty cake shop. When a tired—looking old man came in to buy some cakes, I immediate helped him sit down in a chair and brought him the cake. After he paid them, I said thanks to him. He looked too happy that he praised me with a satisfied smile. From this , I learned: “Be good to others or they’ll be good to you.”

 (3) Good

After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch". I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug  (擁抱) you?"  The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, "That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma. " "Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.

 (4)

Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, even in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project  together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .

(5)

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!

(6)

I’m good all the subjects, and always ready help others. At school I get along well with my classmates. Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time. It’s the relationship among my deskmate and me. He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well. But he’s a person with a few words. What’s more, he got angry easily. I don’t know how to deal with him. Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I value our friendship. I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other better. I do hope we will be close to each other than before.

(7)

Although it was autumn, but it was snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the late afternoon, we found that our water bottles froze because cold weather. But we still enjoyed us during the journey. At one point, we were surprising to find ourselves cycling through clouds. In the valleys colorful butterflies fly around us. It was a great fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and shorts.

(8)

College student have a few ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart this, many good students can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I only let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.

(9)

I am angry about the act of dishonest in exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student or I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, I caught by my English teacher. Because she was one of my favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at the moment. I thought cheat would help me keeps my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only me but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own, by do their best, but not by cheating.

(10)

Friendship is very important. Everyone need friendship. In all our lives we can’t live with friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties. But real friendship is no easy to come about. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher.   By a friend’s advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.

(11)

My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one new thing every day. Don’t think that you are ever too old go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He get his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that stay young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, which is the only way to be always young.

                   (12)

My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Has my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend any training class but learned it all by myself. Strangely, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), it can keep me float. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.

(13)

In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was violent shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings are leaning down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she recovered. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other country, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.

(14)

I’m glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. I’m still worried about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but you’d better have a good rest and take good care of you since you are sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days which you helped me to my English. In your help, I make good progress. To my regret, my English is still not good enough though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advices on it?

(15)

One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in a McDonald then two young girls came in hand in hand. While enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou staring something with curiosity. I rose my eyes to see what was happening. The two girls are making gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various gestures with Zhou following me in high spirit. We played and laughed cheerfully as if there were no one else present. Suddenly we saw both the girls glaring at us. Before we could explain them, they had walked out angrily, left the food unfinished. They thought we were making fun of them. How I regretted!

(16)

We often think insects to be harmless. This is part true. Many an insect are harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most the time. Hunger insects kill crops in the fields. Farmers spray the field as to get rid of these insects. Do this mean that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make honey. Without bees and other insects, many tree would have no fruit. Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat other insects that kill fruit trees.

                    (17)

Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After two hour’s ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment we got off from the bus. We played games on the hillside and swim in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds around the hills. We took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to go back. It was past five o’clock then we returned school. What a good trip we had today! I’ll never forget it.

(18)

It’s important of us to keep good eyesight. But do you know what to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work long . You’d better have a rest, looking in the long distance after you’ve studied an hour and so. Second, pay attention for the following: Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light; don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when read you should keep a book away from your eye for a foot. Third, do eye-exercises every day, that will also help you keeps good eyesight. If you obey the rules, I think, you may prevent yourself from become short-sighted.

短文改錯(cuò)答案

         (1)

When I talked with the man, I found that from his childhood he develops the

                                                              developed

 habit of carrying the book in his pocket

                    a

all the time. He was used to read every

                            reading

minute when he had anything else to do.

                  nothing

He found a book especial useful during

               especially

the periods of waiting: waiting ^ doctors,

                              for

meals ,buses and so on. That is how he

                           was

 found himself fifteen minute a day

                      minutes

for reading. That was how she read

                          he

twenty books a year-----one thousand of

                                    刪除

books all his lifetime.

(2)

What a long winter vacation! I stay

                           stayed

 at home doing nothing except home

work every day like ^robot.

                     a

 One day, a idea occurred to me: “Why

        an

 not to find a part-time job to learn

    刪掉

 something new?” The next morning,

 after visit many shops, I was lucky

     visiting

 enough to find one in a small but pretty

 cake shop. When a tired—looking old

 man came in to buy some cakes, I

 immediate helped him sit down in a

 immediately

 chair and brought him the cake. After

                         cakes

 he paid^ them, I said thanks to him. He

      for

 looked too happy that he praised me

       so

 with a satisfied smile. From this , I

 learned: “Be good to others or they’ll

                            and

 be good to you.”

(3)

After shopping, Mother and I went to a

 restaurant for lunch. I  notice   Mother

                         noticed

 looking at a nearby table occupy   by

                          occupied

 an elderly woman and ∧ young

                       a

 couple. They ate silently, and it was

clearly that things were not going well.

clear

As we left, Mother stopped  on  their

                          by/at

table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm

                            putting

 around the unhappy old woman. "You

 remind me so many of my mother.

              much

May I hug (擁抱) you?" The woman

 smiled happily as she accepted to  it.

                              刪掉

 After we left, I said, "That was very

 nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think

                      But

 she looked like Grandma. " "Neither

 did me," said Mother cheerfully.

     I

(4)

Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her

 except for that she was strange. She

 didn’t talk many. Her hair was black

              much

and purple, and she worn black sports

                    wore

 shoes and a black sweater, even in the

summer. She was, in fact, rather

 attractively, and she never seemed

 attractive     but

 ^care what the rest of us thought

 to

 about her. Like the rest of my classmate

                              classmates

, I didn’t really want to get closest to her.

                               close

 It was only when we did their

                         our

chemistry project together that I begin to

                                  began

understand why Christine dressed the

way she did .

(5)

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are

                                  were

shopping the other day. She liked it at

once. Then she bent down and picked ^

                                   it

up to look at a price on it. As she did this

             the

, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had

                          her

to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked

       hard 

face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the

                      to

shop as fast as she could when a shop

assistant came over to us. It w\as turned

out t o be her own cup, that she’d left on

                       which

 the shelf by mistake. The assistant was

clearly as embarrassing as my sister,

           embarrassed

for I just thought it was funny!

And

              (6)

I’m good ^all the subjects, and

         at

 always ready^ help others. At school I

           to

 get along well with my classmates.

Therefore, I have a problem that troubles

However

myself all the time. It’s the relationship

 me

among my deskmate and me. He is a

 between

hard-working student, who keeps school

rule well. But he’s a person with a few

rues                             刪掉

words. What’s more, he got angry easily.

                       gets

I don’t know how to deal with him.

Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down

         because

to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I

value our friendship. I hope we can

know more about each other and

understand each other better. I do hope

we will be close to each other than

          closer

before.

(7)

Although it was autumn, but it was

                        去掉

 snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that

                          so

 our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the

                                   In

 late afternoon, we found that our water

 bottles froze because ^cold weather.

                      of

 But we still enjoyed us during the

                 ourselves

 journey. At one point, we were

 surprising to find ourselves cycling

  surprised

 through clouds. In the valleys colorful

 butterflies fly around us. It was a great

             flew                刪掉

 fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual

                                 gradually

 became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and

                                                           T-shirts

 shorts.

(8)

College student have a few ways to pay

       students

 their college fees. Many students have

their parents to pay the fees. Some

             刪掉

 students may apply to a bank loan and

                   for

 others will try to find part-time jobs in

 and out of the campus. Apart ∧this,

                            from

 many good students can win a

 scholarship. By this way they can pay

              In

 at least part of the fees. As to me, I only

 let my parents pay half of their fees

                             my

 because they are ∧ rich enough.

                 not

 Beside my study, I will take up a

Besides

 part-time job by teach some high

                 teaching

 school students math, physics,

 chemistry and English, as I’m very

 good at these important subjects. Of

 course I will also work very hard at my

 lessons in order to I can easily win a

                 that

scholarship.

(9)

I am angry about the act of dishonest in

                           dishonesty

 exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good

 student or ∧ I’ve never cheated. I

           that

 once write the answer on my hand for a

      wrote

 history test but unluckily I∧ caught

                             was

 by my English teacher. Because she

 was one of my favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I               

 felt at the moment. I thought cheat would

                              cheating

 help me keeps my straight A’s. Little∧I

         keep                          did

 know that I was hurting not only me

                               myself

but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students

to succeed by learning with their own ,

                        on

by do the best they can, but not by cheating.

   doing

(10)

Friendship is very important. Everyone need friendship. In all our lives we can’t

                                      needs

live with friendship just as we can’t live

  without                            

without air and water. Friendship makes

us getting on well with one another

   get

to go ahead under different kind of

                            kinds

difficulties . But real friendship is no

                                      not

easy to come about. True friendship

must be sincerely and be based on

         sincere

understand each other . A good friend

understanding

can always be a good teacher . By a

friend’s advices we are persuading to go

          advice        persuaded

the right way. Therefore ∧ more

                        the

friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.

(11)

My secret of staying young is simple:

keeping your mind awake and you will

keep

stay young all over. Take an interest in

 ∧ world around you, and learn at least

the

 one new thing every day. Don’t think

that you are ever too old ∧ go back to

                          to

school. I know a man who entered

medical college in 70. He get his degree

                at       got

with honors and became a famous doctor

. Other man went to law school at 71

 Another

and is now a active lawyer. You may say

          an

that stay young is easy only for those

    staying                                   

live in the future. In fact, you can do it

living或在live前加who

whether you care enough to try to keep

if

your mind awake and active, which is the only way to be always young.

(12)

My swimming experience is extreme

                         extremely

interesting. There was a time when I

swim like a rock. This went on till one

swam

day when I was fishing with a friend of

mine at ∧ nearby pond. I slipped

        a

into one. Has my friend not come to my

     it   Had

rescue, I would have been drowned.

Ever since then, I had come to know the

                  have

importance of learning to swim. I didn’t

attend any training class but learned it all

by myself. Strangely, I have no

difficult swimming at all now. Though

difficulty

the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的),

              looks

at least it can keep me float. Thinking of

                       floating

this, I feel quite satisfying.

                   satisfied

(13)

In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong

On

was going on her way to school happily

then suddenly she felt the street was

when

violent shaking. The trees were torn up

violently

and many buildings are leaning down

                   were                                                   

to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by fallen buildings. She was knocked

                                          falling

down by a tree before she knew ∧.

                               it

Two doctors carried him to safety and

                    her

she was settled down in a tent for treatment.

After some time, she recovered. Seeing such many goods

                                        so

from the mainland of China and other country,

                                     countries

she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.

                                               rebuilt

(14)

I’m glad to write to you. It is near a

                                nearly

month since you had left our hospital.

             去掉had

I’m still worried about you. How are you

get along these days? I think you may be

getting

much better now, but you’d have a

good rest and take good care of you

                             yourself

since you are ∧ sixty-year-old man. I

              a

still remember those days which you

                          when

helped me to my English. In your help, I

          with         With

make good progress. To my regret

made     

, my English is still not good enough

though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advices on it?

                                                             advice

(15)

One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in a McDonald then two young

                                                       when

girls came in hand in hand. While

enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou

enjoying

staring ∧ something with curiosity.

       at

I rose my eyes to see what was

raised 

happening. The two girls are making

                        were

gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes.

I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various

                                before

gestures with Zhou following me in high spirit.

                                       spirits

We played and laughed cheerfully

as if there were no one else present.

             was                                                         

Suddenly we saw both the girls glaring at us. Before we could explain∧ them,

                                                                     to

they had walked out angrily, left the

                             leaving

food unfinished. They thought we were

making fun of them. How I regretted!

(16)

We often think insects to be harmless.

                             harmful

This is part true. Many an insect are

       partly                     is

harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others

                               Other

insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most ∧ the

                                                                  of

time. Hunger insects kill crops in the

     Hungry

fields Farmers spray the field ∧ as to

                               so

get rid of these insects. Do this mean

                          Does                                          

that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make

                                                    help                            

honey. Without bees and other insects, many tree would have no fruit.

                                           trees

Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat

other insects that kill fruit trees.

(17)

Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the

                                                                      in

school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every

                                        pleasant

one of us was excited

 After two hour's ride, we

           hours’

arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment

we got off from the bus. We played games on the

           去掉                                                           

hillside and swim in the river. After that

            swam

we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds

                                                                     which

around the hills. We took a lot of photo

                                  photos

and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to go back.

                                     Passed

It was past five o’clock then we returned

                         when

 ∧ school. What a good trip we had

to

 today! I’ll never forget it.

(18)

It’s important of us to keep good

               for

eyesight. But do you know what to

                          how

protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work long . You’d better have

                                                  working

a rest, looking into the distance after you’ve studied an hour and so.

                                                                 or

Second, pay attention for the following:

                      to

Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light;

don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when read you should keep a book

                                               reading

away from your eye for a foot.

               eyes

Third, do eye-exercises every day, that

                                   which

will also help you keeps good eyesight.

                   keep    

If you obey the rules, I think, you may prevent yourself from become

                                                             becoming

short-sighted.