在雅思英語(yǔ)寫作備考過(guò)程中，十分有必要對(duì)一定數(shù)量的滿分范文進(jìn)行反復(fù)推敲，從中吸取好的做法和相關(guān)知識(shí)。

下面是一篇關(guān)于“人工智能”的滿分考官范文。題目要求如下：

Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

一些人認(rèn)為人工智能的發(fā)展對(duì)我們的生活有好處，而另外一些人認(rèn)為人類還沒(méi)有準(zhǔn)備好，生活在一個(gè)電腦比人更加智能聰明的世界。

第一段：Introduction

People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.

• 第1句：引出話題（人工智能）
• 第2句：給出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)（認(rèn)為既有有點(diǎn)，也有缺點(diǎn)）

值得學(xué)習(xí)的詞匯：

• two opposing points of view 2個(gè)相反的觀點(diǎn)
• be fascinated by 被..所吸引
• be apprehensive about = be worried about 對(duì)..感到擔(dān)心
• possible negative effects = disadvantages 缺點(diǎn)

第二段：Body paragraph 1

On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits. Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can, especially in areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. For example, robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than a human doctor, and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves. Such technologiescan improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors. It is easy to imagine how these developments, and many others, will steadily improve our quality of life.

• 第1句話：中心句（人工智能有優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
• 第2句話：支撐理由（機(jī)器在要求高精度和大量計(jì)算領(lǐng)域，比人類做得更好）
• 第3句話：舉例支撐第2句話的理由（機(jī)器人與醫(yī)生：外科手術(shù)；汽車自動(dòng)駕駛與人類駕駛）
• 第4句話：進(jìn)一步基于舉出的例子，說(shuō)明人工智能技術(shù)的好處（減少人類錯(cuò)誤，改善生活質(zhì)量）

值得學(xué)習(xí)的詞匯：

• areas that require high levels of accuracy 要求高精確度的領(lǐng)域
• calculations using large amounts of data 需要大量數(shù)據(jù)計(jì)算
• carry out surgical procedures 完成外科手術(shù)
• greater precision 更高的精確度
• use sensors and cameras to drive themselves 利用傳感器和相機(jī)自動(dòng)駕駛
• reducing the likelihood of human errors 減少人類犯錯(cuò)的可能性
• improve our quality of life 改善生活質(zhì)量

第三段：Body paragraph 2

On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful. In the short term, it is likely that we will see a rise in unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software programs. For example, self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving jobs, such as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. In the medium term, if intelligent technologies gradually take jobs away from humans, we may find that people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life. A longer term fear is that computers become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight and without regard for our well-being.

• 第1句話：中心句（人工智能有缺點(diǎn)）
• 第2句話：缺點(diǎn)1（短期：失業(yè)率上升）
• 第3句話：舉例支撐缺點(diǎn)1（自動(dòng)駕駛使司機(jī)失業(yè)）
• 第4句話：缺點(diǎn)2（中期：失去生活目的）
• 第5句話：缺點(diǎn)3（長(zhǎng)期：人類失去對(duì)計(jì)算機(jī)的控制）

值得學(xué)習(xí)的詞匯：

• a rise in unemployment 失業(yè)率上升
• are replaced by machines or software programs 被軟件和及其所取代
• self-driving vehicles 自動(dòng)駕駛車輛
• cause redundancies in driving jobs 導(dǎo)致司機(jī)下崗失業(yè)
• people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life 人們的技能會(huì)降低，且失去生活的意義
• without human oversight 不在人類的監(jiān)督下
• without regard for our well-being 不考慮人類的福利

第四段：Conclusion

In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.

• 1句話：重復(fù)開頭段的觀點(diǎn)（用不同給的方式表述）

此外，上述范文中，還有大量值得模仿學(xué)習(xí)的英語(yǔ)句型。

希望大家能夠好好反復(fù)推敲這篇范文。相信一定會(huì)有很大的收獲。

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