第一：英語(yǔ)作文開(kāi)頭/四方式

　　1.“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”式開(kāi)頭

　　一般來(lái)說(shuō)，文章的開(kāi)頭應(yīng)盡量做到“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”，即要用簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言引出文章的話題，使人一開(kāi)始就能了解文章要說(shuō)明的內(nèi)容。

　?、?對(duì)于敘事類的文章，可以在開(kāi)頭把人物、時(shí)間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

　?、?對(duì)于論述性的文章，可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，接著展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money (時(shí)間和金錢)” 的開(kāi)頭可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but……

　　2.回憶性開(kāi)頭

　　在描述事件或游記類的文章中，采用回憶性的開(kāi)頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類型的開(kāi)頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯，如never forget(永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法忘記)、 remember (記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、 exciting(令人激動(dòng)的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過(guò)的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭還以這樣寫(xiě)：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

　　3.疑問(wèn)性開(kāi)頭

　　在敘事類或論述性的文章中，都可采用疑問(wèn)型開(kāi)頭，這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(種樹(shù))”的開(kāi)頭可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is …… 再如“Traveling Abroad(出國(guó)之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore？

　　4.倒敘式開(kāi)頭

　　在有的文章，特別是敘事類的文章中，可以采用倒敘的寫(xiě)作手法，先寫(xiě)出事件的結(jié)果，再陳述過(guò)程。如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開(kāi)頭可以這樣寫(xiě)：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It's a ... story.

　　第二：英語(yǔ)作文結(jié)尾四方式

　　1.自然結(jié)尾，點(diǎn)明主題

　　隨著文章的結(jié)束，文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結(jié)尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結(jié)尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

　　2.首尾呼應(yīng)

　　升華主題在文章的結(jié)尾可以用含義較深的話點(diǎn)明主題，深化主題，起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))”的結(jié)尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

　　3.反問(wèn)結(jié)尾，引起深思

　　這種方式的結(jié)尾雖然形式是問(wèn)句，但意義卻是肯定的，而且具有一定的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用，可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學(xué)英語(yǔ)能為我們帶來(lái)許多樂(lè)趣)” 的結(jié)尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don't you think learning English is great fun?

　　4.表達(dá)祝愿，闡述愿望

　　這種方式的結(jié)尾常出現(xiàn)在書(shū)信或演講稿的文體中，表示對(duì)他人的祝?；?qū)?lái)的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農(nóng)民們的一封信)”的結(jié)尾可以是：I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.

　　另外，書(shū)信的結(jié)尾常有以下形式的祝福語(yǔ)：Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year; I wish you have a good time等。

　　第三：作文范文

　　范文1〖題目〗根據(jù)下列第三中學(xué)八年級(jí)（3）班學(xué)生上學(xué)方式的調(diào)查表，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。不少于70 個(gè)單詞。

　　上學(xué)方式：Bus——Walking——Bike——Car

　　學(xué)生人數(shù)：15——10——25——0

　　〖范文〗

　　There are fifty students in Class 1, Grade 8 at Yuying Middle School. Every day they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Ten students walk. They think walking is good for their health and they live near the school. Twenty-five students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car

　　范文2〖題目〗假如你是Li Tao，請(qǐng)根據(jù)昨天的情況寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的日記。

　　早上感到頭疼，老打噴嚏(sneeze)，媽媽帶你去醫(yī)院，醫(yī)生檢查了一下并問(wèn)了一些情況，最后給你開(kāi)了一些藥并讓你好好休息。第二天你覺(jué)得好多了。

　　〖范文〗

　　Wednesday, October 12th, 2009

　　I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. “What's your trouble, little boy?” the doctor asked. “I can't stop sneezing and I have a headache. ” “When did it start?” “This morning. ” “Open your mouth and say ‘Ah’. ” My mother was worried and asked the doctor, “What's the matter with him?” “He has a bad cold, but it's nothing serious. ” the doctor said. Then the doctor let me take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest. 

　　I feel better after taking the medicine.

　　范文4〖題目〗一些英國(guó)朋友要來(lái)參加你們班舉行的英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)。作為主持人，你需要用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份60-80個(gè)詞的歡迎辭。包括以下英文提示的內(nèi)容（開(kāi)頭已給出）：

　　1. the number of students (boys 32, girls 28)

　　2. What do you think of English?

　　3. How do you learn English in your free time (magazines, TV, radio, etc)?

　　4. Your English programs (plays, songs, etc).

　　5. ending（結(jié)束語(yǔ)）

　　〖范文〗

　　Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen,

　　Welcome to our class and welcome to our English Evening.

　　First of all, let me say a few words about our class. There are 60 students in our class. 32 of us are boys and the others are girls. Most of us like English and study hard at it. In our free time we often read English books, newspapers and magazines. Sometimes we learn English on the radio and sometimes on TV.

　　This evening you'll enjoy some short plays, songs, dances and so on by our classmates.

　　I hope you'll like these programs and have a good time.

　　Thank you!

　　范文4〖題目〗Tony作為中外文化交流的使者，從加拿大來(lái)到北京參加了一個(gè)月的“體驗(yàn)中國(guó)”活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)在，他想寫(xiě)封信將在這里的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況告訴遠(yuǎn)方的父母。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，幫助Tony完成這封信。

　　提示：

　　1.與中國(guó)學(xué)生相互學(xué)習(xí)，相互交流，周末參加體育活動(dòng);

　　2.游覽北京的名勝古跡，觀看京劇(Peking Opera), 品嘗美食, 了解中國(guó)歷史;

　　3.喜歡這里的生活。

　　要求：1.語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，字跡工整。

　　2.詞數(shù)在60-80之間；開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　〖范文〗

　　Dear Dad and Mom,

　　How is it going? I hope you are in good health. I enjoyed living in Beijing very much. I studied and communicated culture with Chinese students. At the weekends, I played different kinds of sports. Last week I visited many places of interest in Beijing, and I saw Peking Opera yesterday. I enjoyed delicious food here and learned a lot about Chinese history. Hope to see you soon. 

　　Yours, Tony

　　Tony